This poem grew out of some thoughts about how people (me included) who’ve survived systemic violence are dealing (or not) with the current administration’s exaltation of racist, sexist, homophobic, anti-Semitic, misogynist individuals and organizations. It was originally published in Rise Up Review. Go show them some love — they publish a new poem every day on their site, a place for “the poetry of opposition.”
That’s a great poem. Very moving, and I see the truth of it. Thank you for sharing.
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WOW!! 🙂
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Well written post
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The word used portray a vivid picture
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Nice poem…Ive posted one too not much of a blogger though.
Im new here still exploring…view my page:)
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Great written visualization! Thank you for sharing. This is my very first comment, as is my first day on wordpress and posting my first poem. I’m stumbling in the dark for sure, only hoping to do something right 🙂
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Lovely post hehe
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Wow!!
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It is, well, it’s a great poem.
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Good one!
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This is a lovely poem. I love the use of the image of the frightened hand scrabbling in a dark room- very appropriate!
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Not only a great poem. But a powerful message. Let your voice be heard.
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A wonderful poem indeed, I find it to be deep and soulful
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right selection of words, i love the gun-shy poem
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Intelligence in the piece
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OMG! This poem is fantastic
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I’ve been seeing/reading a lot of Trump-related articles in creative writing. I can’t say I know Trump but with I’ve been getting, ours is not far different from yours.
With us, violence has taken a front seat, humanity at the back. And is it for the common good? I do not know.
Thanks for this.
Sincerely,
The Ugly Writer
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I’m always looking for our storytellers.
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A clear picture of many things written down in a few words😊 really like the poem
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A lot of messages hidden in these words. You’re really good. I myself am new to poetry and would like you to check out my poems. Would love some valuable feedback. Thanks!
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Thanks for your kind words! I do not offer feedback here, though.
A great way to get feedback on your work is to start a poetry workshop where you live. I started one by putting a notice up in a bookstore, and it’s still going strong 10 years later!
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Good advice. Thanks for the tip!
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Apprecciate you blogging this
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